Given the latest software update, I read through the Operations manual and noted some minor errors and possible corrections/clarifications for consideration. It suggested to post feedback on the forum so I've done it here. Many of these are trivial (and pedantic), some less so. Feel free to ignore/skip/disagree as you wish.
It is quite extensive document - I appreciate it's a difficult trade-off between containing enough information to cover everything while not being so daunting for newcomers. Sometimes I found it a bit wordy but generally very comprehensive.
Biggest omission for me was the low visibility of how to find out and configure the Hex Code for your own aircraft. i.e. look it up on G-INFO and enter on the config screen (this is buried in the config section on Page 33). The FAQ answers about how long them system takes to boot suggest this is a common area of confusion. I think these should be more prominent as part of the "how to get up and running section". The hex code needs to be updated every time you fly a different aircraft which can be easily overlooked or forgotten.
This latest version has the feature to download your flown track onto a USB stick but I couldn't find out quite how to do that. Page 37 is a bit vague. I wondered if it is also possible to download/view the aircraft that PAW has seen recently. If so, useful if could be explained somewhere.
Trivia:
First line refers to Page 55 for latest software changes, first line of contents on Page 3 refers to page 54 (it should be 55)
Page 5: Make pilotawarehardware.com an active HTML link
Page 5: Pilotaware Classic Units. Is there any other product variant? This isn't Coke (yet). Maybe you have some future plans but it seems slightly confusing to have a "Classic" product without stating the context. Clarify this is the only complete product available at the moment. The older B+ based products would be homebuilt only (and are presumably no longer encouraged but will continue to be supported).
Page 6: Must the Wi-Fi dongle be connected into the bottom right USB socket? Or is this just a preference. I wasn't aware the system cared which USB sockets were used for any of the peripherals.
Page 6: ADSB receiver. Presumably this also receives Mode C now too, not just ADSB and Mode S as stated. It's really a 1090MHz receiver and captures anything in that band.
Page 7: Picture description. Is this a Pilotaware Classic unit? If so, say so.
Page 9: ..includes your MAC code. Explain this is a unique hardware serial number specific to the physical wired Ethernet port on the Raspberry Pi module, and not of the Wi-Fi dongle. Replacing/upgrading the Pi hardware (eg to upgrade to Pi 2 to receive Mode S/C) will require a new software licence and will appear as a different Wi-Fi hotspot/SSID.
Page 13: "Flight ID or if not available, their hex code". I would think a registration (G-ABCD) is most likely for GA aircraft.
Page 13: Are Mode S or C now shown on SkyDemon? If so, worth a picture and what to expect (or add that later into the Mode S/C section).
Page 13: Seneca's should not have an apostrophe
Page 21: Header changes from this page forward to earlier software version 01c July 2016
Page 28: I think this should attach more importance to configuring the correct Hex code for each aircraft you fly in than some of the points here
Page 30: "When the licence expires, the software will sleep". Presumably it will still operate as a Wi-Fi access point and you can access the configuration pages, it just won't actively transmit your position via P3i or stream traffic data to your navigation App.
Page 33: last line. "select a save and get a refresh" -> "press save which will refresh the page"
Page 34/35: Capitalisation of Traffic/traffic and Page/page. Full stop not comma after issue.
Page 35: Distance-KM row... mode S or C. Ditto BR and Sig rows.
Page 39: Updating software via "pen drive memory stick". I usually call these USB memory sticks which I thought was the more common name. It doesn't say where exactly to get the .pgp file from, just pilotaware.com. Since I think this could easily be confused with the zip file (linked to from pilotawarehardware.com), this should be spelt out very clearly. I guess it needs to be copied onto the top directory of the USB drive without any other files.
Page 44: "Please note How" -> "How"
Page 44: A picture diagram illustrating what is shown on your tablet for Mode S/C traffic would be very helpful.
Page 51: Base station (ie clubhouse/tower installation). Clarify what to set the "Flight ID" to and why you'd make this a TX/RX rather than RX only device. I guess the TX/RX would be very useful if I was based on an aircraft carrier
I don't really understand what a Base configured as TX/RX does differently from a mobile unit in an aircraft.
Page 54: "It's not possible ... FLARM". I thought this latest version did support FLARM reception via an external FLARM receiver? No mention of what kit is needed and how to configure to get that to work.
Various spellings throughout of WIFI, Wi-Fi (I prefer the latter), Pi and pi, Raspberry and raspberry, license and licence
The screenshots of the configuration page are a bit small and difficult to read.
There seems to be an excess of "Please note" comments which I feel become distracting and counter productive if the text is well written.
I appreciate a lot of work has gone in to this document, so these comments are entirely meant to be helpful rather than critical or negative. Keep up the good work!